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	<title>Comments on: Chapter 2 Page 21</title>
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		<title>By: Meredith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Meredith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 May 2008 21:32:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ooh boy! It is definitely an improvement. A couple suggestions:

- I would suggest adding a "First" and "Most Recent" links along with "Previous" and "Next," below the strip of the day. 
- From a design standpoint, placing the nav stuff to the left of the comic is a bit distracting. There's lots of text! I think it would work better on the right, like you have on your blog - the reader will look to the comic first, and then move on to the nav stuff. This is also consistent with other webcomics I read...most of them either place the nav/blog stuff below the comic or to the right. 
- I think a little more color would be nice...if not the background of the page, maybe some sort of accent on the nav box.

Apart from that, very nice! It's good that one can read the individual strips one at a time now.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ooh boy! It is definitely an improvement. A couple suggestions:</p>
<p>- I would suggest adding a &#8220;First&#8221; and &#8220;Most Recent&#8221; links along with &#8220;Previous&#8221; and &#8220;Next,&#8221; below the strip of the day.<br />
- From a design standpoint, placing the nav stuff to the left of the comic is a bit distracting. There&#8217;s lots of text! I think it would work better on the right, like you have on your blog - the reader will look to the comic first, and then move on to the nav stuff. This is also consistent with other webcomics I read&#8230;most of them either place the nav/blog stuff below the comic or to the right.<br />
- I think a little more color would be nice&#8230;if not the background of the page, maybe some sort of accent on the nav box.</p>
<p>Apart from that, very nice! It&#8217;s good that one can read the individual strips one at a time now.</p>
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