<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0"
	xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/"
	xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"
	xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"
	xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/"
		>
<channel>
	<title>Comments on: Chapter 2 Page 21</title>
	<atom:link href="http://claritycomic.com/2008/05/15/chapter-2-page-21/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" />
	<link>http://claritycomic.com/2008/05/15/chapter-2-page-21/</link>
	<description>A new comic every Thursday!</description>
	<lastBuildDate>Tue, 28 Apr 2009 12:50:59 -0400</lastBuildDate>
	<generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=abc</generator>
	<sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod>
	<sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency>
		<item>
		<title>By: Meredith</title>
		<link>http://claritycomic.com/2008/05/15/chapter-2-page-21/comment-page-1/#comment-42</link>
		<dc:creator>Meredith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 May 2008 21:32:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://claritycomic.com/wordpress/?p=183#comment-42</guid>
		<description>Ooh boy! It is definitely an improvement. A couple suggestions:

- I would suggest adding a &quot;First&quot; and &quot;Most Recent&quot; links along with &quot;Previous&quot; and &quot;Next,&quot; below the strip of the day. 
- From a design standpoint, placing the nav stuff to the left of the comic is a bit distracting. There&#039;s lots of text! I think it would work better on the right, like you have on your blog - the reader will look to the comic first, and then move on to the nav stuff. This is also consistent with other webcomics I read...most of them either place the nav/blog stuff below the comic or to the right. 
- I think a little more color would be nice...if not the background of the page, maybe some sort of accent on the nav box.

Apart from that, very nice! It&#039;s good that one can read the individual strips one at a time now.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ooh boy! It is definitely an improvement. A couple suggestions:</p>
<p>- I would suggest adding a &#8220;First&#8221; and &#8220;Most Recent&#8221; links along with &#8220;Previous&#8221; and &#8220;Next,&#8221; below the strip of the day.<br />
- From a design standpoint, placing the nav stuff to the left of the comic is a bit distracting. There&#8217;s lots of text! I think it would work better on the right, like you have on your blog &#8211; the reader will look to the comic first, and then move on to the nav stuff. This is also consistent with other webcomics I read&#8230;most of them either place the nav/blog stuff below the comic or to the right.<br />
- I think a little more color would be nice&#8230;if not the background of the page, maybe some sort of accent on the nav box.</p>
<p>Apart from that, very nice! It&#8217;s good that one can read the individual strips one at a time now.</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
</channel>
</rss>
